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	<title>Community Poem</title>
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	<pubDate>Mon, 5 Jan 2009 05:35:49 GMT</pubDate>
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		<title>Re: First line Picking Blackberries</title>
		
		<pubDate>Mon, 24 Aug 2009 14:35:56 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>AC</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>I get caught on the thorns</p><p>Reaching in brambles for berries</p><p>Their ripeness and sweetness</p><p>Safe from government levies</p><p>So I gorge in the morning</p><p>And I gorge by the night</p><p>On these beautiful blackthings</p><p>I pick with fingers so light</p><p>I pick from the top </p><p>And the dogs from the bottom</p><p>The doctor and nurse so glad</p><p>Their message i&#39;ve gotten</p><p>For it rings in my ears</p><p>What they&#39;ve had to say</p><p>Now I can tell them that i&#39;ve had</p><p>My five a day.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line</title>
		
		<pubDate>Tue, 11 Aug 2009 20:59:36 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>molly119</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Or possibly not you said that&#39;s true.</p><p>No roses are red no voilets  blue</p><p>The cherries all ate</p><p>salad leaves on our plate</p><p>now is the time try not to hack</p><p>to gather the berries</p><p>this time they are black</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line Absolutely Thing( including the kitchen sink).</title>
		
		<pubDate>Mon, 20 Apr 2009 10:31:41 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>A.C.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Occasionally i&#39;m accused of being a dreamer</p><p>Or perhaps, of not being all there,</p><p>But at the community poem,</p><p>Blank pages I stare,</p><p>So in this attempt to</p><p>get your creative juices flowing</p><p>I throw caution to the wind,</p><p>So lets try and get going,</p><p>The verse might rhyme</p><p>or possibly not,</p><p>And to be quite honest</p><p>I dont give a jot,</p><p>Spelling mistakes,</p><p>There may be few,</p><p>Blame it on  a slip of the finger,</p><p>I always do.</p><p>Iambic pentameter,</p><p>Goes out of the door,</p><p>It was alright for Shakespear,</p><p>Need I say more.</p><p>Now take a break,</p><p>go and have a drink of some tea,</p><p>While I rack my brains,</p><p>For this attempt at poetry.</p><p>Are you back,</p><p>Do you feel refreshed,</p><p>For your community poem,</p><p>You dont need a test.</p><p>Now this morning,</p><p>While out in the sun,</p><p>Well it was the dogs idea,</p><p>And I dont find fun.</p><p>But we happened to find a sink,</p><p>Of the Belfast kind,</p><p>It was broke in two pieces,</p><p>And there so hard to find.</p><p>And a childs dummy,</p><p>Hangs in a tree,</p><p>And I thaught Leave it there,</p><p>It wasn&#39;t for me.</p><p>I&#39;m sorry now,</p><p>If I&#39;m begining to bore,</p><p>For this looks like being,</p><p>A part of my grand tour.</p><p>My friend Sally Anne,</p><p>Has started to write,</p><p>But she&#39;s from the south,</p><p>And its their corner she fights,</p><p>I can&#39;t carry on,</p><p>I know not, where to stop,</p><p>The pens in my hand,</p><p>And i&#39;m stating to flop.</p><p>Twenty minuites is all </p><p>This lot took,</p><p>So let the Creative juices flow,</p><p>I wish you all the best, and good luck.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line The Stonemason</title>
		
		<pubDate>Mon, 20 Apr 2009 12:43:10 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>A.C.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Hands so rough </p><p>From handling stone,</p><p>The pillars for the gate</p><p>Have now to be honed.</p><p>Sandstone blocks</p><p>Roughly six feet by two,</p><p>Now sit in the yard</p><p>And await their cue.</p><p>For the mason now</p><p>Will make his mark,</p><p>And decide upon</p><p>Where the work is to start.</p><p>And his turn now</p><p>Is to chip and bang,</p><p>And around the yard</p><p>You can here the clang.</p><p>And from chipped stone</p><p>And a pile of dust,</p><p>These works of art</p><p>Are a compulsary must.</p><p>For to adorn</p><p>The blacksmiths gate,</p><p>The work of the mason</p><p>Must surely be great.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>The Forgetmenot</title>
		
		<pubDate>Sun, 19 Apr 2009 09:33:24 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Sally Anne Beaumont</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>You cannot forget</p><p>The forgetmenot,</p><p>As it dares you </p><p>not to go,</p><p>For it lives its life </p><p>Among the nettles,</p><p>The place it dared</p><p>you not to go.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line The Old Steel Farm Gate( Version 2).</title>
		
		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Apr 2009 16:56:58 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>A.C.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>The blacksmiths pride</p><p>and joy of old,</p><p>Was to make a gate</p><p>oh so bold.</p><p>The steel was tempered</p><p>and beat to shape,</p><p>As the blacksmith hammered,</p><p>at this gate.</p><p>Joints of mortice and of</p><p>tennon,</p><p>For this work of art</p><p>inspired from heaven.</p><p>And the sweat would roll,</p><p>and the smoke would pour,</p><p>From the furnace to </p><p>the floor.</p><p>And he would beat, and</p><p>he would bang,</p><p>And the lump of metal,</p><p>on the anvil sang.</p><p>High pitched notes</p><p>from heaven above,</p><p>This work of art, was the </p><p>blacksmiths love.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line The Old Steel Farm Gate( Version1).</title>
		
		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Apr 2009 16:29:15 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>A.C.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>How it&#39;s stood the test of </p><p>time, </p><p>The rusty old gate now</p><p>covered in grime.</p><p>Standing alone at the </p><p>edge of the field,</p><p>I stand and wonder what</p><p>memories it might yield.</p><p>This work of art,</p><p>a blacksmiths joy,</p><p>The skills he used,</p><p>learned as a man and boy.</p><p>How old, it&#39;s imposible </p><p>to date,</p><p>The year the blacksmith</p><p>made this gate.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line Mellow Days.</title>
		
		<pubDate>Sat, 4 Apr 2009 16:44:27 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>A.C.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Mellow days now dawn,</p><p>Of springtime and sun,</p><p>Mists over fields,</p><p>And scents yet to come,</p><p>Daffodils,bluebells,</p><p>Wild garlic and more,</p><p>Over hillsides and banks,</p><p>They are by the score,</p><p>And rivers that now flow,</p><p>With a more gentle ebb,</p><p>Nothing seems rushed,</p><p>What more could you beg.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line The Weeks They Wait.</title>
		
		<pubDate>Sat, 4 Apr 2009 15:10:19 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Norman Parker</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>The weeks they wait,</p><p>May be two, three or four,</p><p>But if I&#39;m honest with you,</p><p>I&#39;m not really sure,</p><p>Depends on the breed,</p><p>Or so they say,</p><p>The bigger the birds,</p><p>The longer the  days,</p><p>But those bundles of fluff,</p><p>With ever open beaks,</p><p>Is well worth the wait,</p><p>For any number of weeks,</p><p>And mum and dad,</p><p>They are ever so proud,</p><p>But how do they keep up,</p><p>With their ever hungry crowd.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line Beaks Full of Branches</title>
		
		<pubDate>Sat, 4 Apr 2009 12:32:49 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>A.C.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Beaks full of branches,</p><p>And twigs fit for nests,</p><p>The birds are so busy,</p><p>And theres no time to rest.</p><p>Days filled with restlessness,</p><p>From dawn through to night,</p><p>Procreation&#39;s to perform,</p><p>And days full of flight.</p><p>Backwards and forwards,</p><p>To their space in a tree,</p><p>And a mum that sits waiting,</p><p>On eggs, patiently. </p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line Robin</title>
		
		<pubDate>Fri, 27 Mar 2009 18:05:07 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>A.C.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>An eye so black,</p><p>And breast so red,</p><p>To tell you that</p><p>Robin, he&#39;s well fed.</p><p>He doesn&#39;t care,</p><p>Be it, winter or spring,</p><p>As you walk your path,</p><p>Pitched notes will ring.</p><p>A song thats sung,</p><p>On low or high,</p><p>Branches and boughs,</p><p>That touch grass or sky.</p><p>And as he follows,</p><p>Singing, you a song,</p><p>In the hopes of you feeding</p><p>He may not be wrong.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line Pennine Reservoirs</title>
		
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Mar 2009 19:56:12 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>W.O.W.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Flooded valleys, dykes and ditches,</p><p>Water gained from upper reaches,</p><p>Dark black holes, and water filled,</p><p>Wind swept reservoirs on pennine hills,</p><p>Moss and Lichened granite blocks,</p><p>Keep these waters, well land locked,</p><p>Arranged in steps down the valley&#39;s,</p><p>Letting gravity, the water carry,</p><p>Signs to warn of the dangers,</p><p>In large letters, for the strangers,</p><p>And tinted sky&#39;s of black and grey,</p><p>To remind, rain, is never far away.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line On The Moors</title>
		
		<pubDate>Sun, 15 Mar 2009 11:19:31 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>N. Parker</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>On the moors,</p><p>In the sun,</p><p>Out of doors,</p><p>Having fun.</p><p>Up high,</p><p>Looking down,</p><p>Surveying all,</p><p>That surrounds.</p><p>Spring wind,</p><p>On my face,</p><p>World below,</p><p>At faster pace.</p><p>Can&#39;t keep up,</p><p>Must slow down,</p><p>To look upon,</p><p>Millbrook town.</p><p>Continuing search</p><p>For the Tame,</p><p>Origins sort,</p><p>Why I came.</p><p>Still not there,</p><p>Miles to go,</p><p>Lifelong quest,</p><p>A need to know.</p><p>Getting closer,</p><p>Day by day,</p><p>This holy grail,</p><p>On the pennine way.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line Colours of Crocus</title>
		
		<pubDate>Tue, 10 Mar 2009 19:43:22 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>A.C.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Colours of Crocus,</p><p>In yellow, white and purple,</p><p>Encompass the the tree&#39;s,</p><p>In ever increasing circles.</p><p>And the unpretentious Robin,</p><p>How sweetly they sing,</p><p>Around the woods,</p><p>Their song does ring.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line Snowdrops now</title>
		
		<pubDate>Tue, 10 Mar 2009 18:59:58 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>A.C.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Snowdrops now,</p><p>Are easly missed,</p><p>Unless by the Sun,</p><p>They are sweetly kissed.</p><p>Heads bowed low,</p><p>In the shadow of the tree&#39;s,</p><p>Quavering gently,</p><p>In a late winter breeze.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line</title>
		
		<pubDate>Tue, 10 Mar 2009 09:13:49 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Pat Ruaune</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Into the soil and the sweet shoots below</p><p>Urging them forth to put on their show.</p><p>How can we have any summer indeed</p><p>Without the green grass and its tall waving seed?</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line Ditch</title>
		
		<pubDate>Sun, 1 Mar 2009 21:23:31 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>A.C.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Stagnant water,</p><p>Nowhere going,</p><p>Standing still, </p><p>Never flowing,</p><p>Neither this way,</p><p>Or even that,</p><p>Similarities shared,</p><p>Falling flat,</p><p>Looking in,</p><p>Water dark,</p><p>No reflections,</p><p>Very stark,</p><p>Little life,</p><p>Touch of green,</p><p>Here and there,</p><p>Not much seen,</p><p>Willows anchored,</p><p>To a bank,</p><p>In a water,</p><p>That always stank</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line The River Tame</title>
		
		<pubDate>Fri, 20 Feb 2009 14:58:39 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>W.O.W.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>A river emerges on a misty moor,</p><p>Water collected from rivulets pure,</p><p>Drained from peat and ling together,</p><p>Flows fast away from the heather,</p><p>Winding it&#39;s way from a pennine hill,</p><p>Hasty to get away from the winter chill,</p><p>Beckoning spring to meet it as it flows,</p><p>Past cotton mills and cottages built in rows,</p><p>Curling, twirling all the way,</p><p>Past fields getting ready for summer hay,</p><p>Under bridges and below roads,</p><p>Always obeying the country code,</p><p>Flowing slow, sometimes fast,</p><p>Depending on how long the mood might last,</p><p>And its final chapter, way on down,</p><p>Is when it reaches Stockport Town.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line The Last Sandfold Reservoir</title>
		
		<pubDate>Fri, 20 Feb 2009 14:06:38 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>A.C.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Pensive, pensive.</p><p>Was my mood,</p><p>But my blood flows now, </p><p>And with attitude,</p><p>As I watch water pour,</p><p>From a hole in the bank,</p><p>It might as well be my blood,</p><p>For here I played many a </p><p>childhood prank.</p><p>But now returned,</p><p>I find I&#39;m to late,</p><p>To watch history</p><p>Disapearing at an </p><p>Alarming rate.</p><p>They&#39;re stacking bricks,</p><p>And stacking fast,</p><p>Over a landscape,</p><p>Never meant to last.</p><p>And once sang</p><p>The skylark, high above,</p><p>Peewit&#39;s flocked and </p><p>So did the doves.</p><p>And now bulldozers stand,</p><p>And wait like tanks,</p><p>Revving up, and ready</p><p>To move with the ranks.</p><p>Over this battlefield,</p><p>Of hills and bricks,</p><p>The sight of which,</p><p>Makes me feel</p><p>Physically sick.</p><p> </p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line</title>
		
		<pubDate>Wed, 18 Feb 2009 13:00:27 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Pat R</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>I know where you mean, down Sandfold way</p><p>Where the dozers roared and giants held sway</p><p>The wheels rolled over dumbing the sound </p><p>Of the great wheel of Life but it still goes round</p><p>The men who wreak havoc don&#39;t seem to wonder</p><p>What others need.  They tear asunder</p><p>Wriggling ponds and singing trees.</p><p>What care they that we&#39;re ill at ease</p><p>So that we have to rave and shout</p><p>To let others know what it&#39;s all about</p><p>Cash is real wealth, we are constantly told,</p><p>But Life will survive, be she ever so old.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line</title>
		
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Feb 2009 13:18:26 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>A.C.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>If id have seen with</p><p>half a chance,</p><p>These ducks that do</p><p>A Springtime dance,</p><p>Over the Moon I</p><p>Would have been</p><p>to be priviledged</p><p>To witness such a </p><p>Scene.</p><p>Now all around us, </p><p>In the air is Spring,</p><p>What sights, what joys,</p><p>What revelations will </p><p>it bring.</p><p>Myself I have to </p><p>take a different path,</p><p>And look for beauty</p><p>In a landscape trashed.</p><p>Theres no sign of Spring</p><p>here, only dereliction,</p><p>Which my dark side treads</p><p>To satisfy an addiction.</p><p>And out of any ashes,</p><p>You can rest assured,</p><p>As night follows day,</p><p>I will resurrect something</p><p>pure.</p><p>Nobody will know,</p><p>I will keep it to myself,</p><p>And one day something</p><p>You might pass, may have </p><p>Started life somewhere else.</p><p>But for now catkins yellow,</p><p>Hang on Willow trees,</p><p>Catching the sun and</p><p>And dance in the breeze.</p><p>Theres hints of colours </p><p>Changing here and there,</p><p>They do not miss</p><p>My prying stare.</p><p>Look deep, look deep,</p><p>look deep and see,</p><p>These colours are there</p><p>for you, as well as me. </p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line</title>
		
		<pubDate>Mon, 16 Feb 2009 15:05:34 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Pat Ruaune</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>   Duck Dance</p><p>How many times have we seen the ducks dance</p><p>In the earliest months when they get the chance?</p><p>Like those two today just ordinary ducks</p><p>That are used to the river the ponds and the brooks</p><p>Their bobbing and curtseying all so thrilling</p><p>And new to them, makes people willing </p><p>To think of the fresh and the new and the clean:</p><p>Daffodils yellow with spears of green, </p><p>Armed to drive away the winter’s dark</p><p>And bring back the faith in our Country Park</p><p>Those birds have braved the frost and snowing</p><p>The bleak damp days and the night winds blowing</p><p>They’ve seen the dawn and the lightning strike</p><p>The foxes and vandals but nothing like</p><p>The things we’ve seen and the things we’ve learned</p><p>Of flooded homes and forests burned.</p><p>Their innocence makes us feel their pleasure</p><p>In their home in the Vale, Our greatest treasure.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line</title>
		
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Feb 2009 20:21:23 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>molly119</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>So as with one voice lets shout about its worth,</p><p>instead of daming the place to the world.</p><p>SAD they say is how we feel</p><p>But come the spring and when the flowers reveal</p><p>We once again will start to sing its praise</p><p>and rejoice that we got over this negative phase</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line Me And The Bird ( HERON).</title>
		
		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Feb 2009 16:21:51 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>A.C.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>On me and the bird, </p><p>life again takes its toll,</p><p>Who pulled the plug,</p><p>On a now derelict hole.</p><p>Feelings of melancholy,</p><p>Hang in the air,</p><p>As me and the bird stand, </p><p>And at each other stare.</p><p>Do we share the same tears,</p><p>As we look around in dismay,</p><p>And the roar of the bulldozer,</p><p>Gets closer each day.</p><p>Just me and the bird,</p><p>Take our last look</p><p>Before turning away,</p><p>From an ancient pond,</p><p>About to be filled in with muck. </p><p>( ok this is&#39;nt about the Vale,</p><p>but its not very far away,</p><p>and it shows what happens,</p><p>when the developers,</p><p>are allowed to have their </p><p>own way).</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line Timber Mausoleum</title>
		
		<pubDate>Sun, 8 Feb 2009 21:56:16 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>W.O.W.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>These timber mausoleums of</p><p>memories of what, once was,</p><p>Trees that were once standing,</p><p>now stacked with no cause,</p><p>Some felled by high winds,</p><p>and others by man,</p><p>A battlefield of broken timber,</p><p>now lies on the land,</p><p>Stand quietly, close your</p><p>eyes and listen,</p><p>Imagine a Requiem Mass,</p><p>because this is all that is</p><p>Missing. </p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line Standing Stacks</title>
		
		<pubDate>Sat, 7 Feb 2009 19:49:18 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>N. Parker</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Standing stacks of branches,</p><p>Amongst the trees,</p><p>Can anybody explain,</p><p>and what is the need.?</p><p>Is this some form of </p><p>Pagan right.?</p><p>A ritual, where these stacks</p><p>are compelled to almost double</p><p>over night.</p><p>What is their purpose?</p><p>I can&#39;t work it out,</p><p>Do I need to scream,</p><p>Do I need to shout?</p><p>When will it stop?</p><p>Nobody seems to know.</p><p>Perhaps when all trees </p><p>have been cut,</p><p>And everything has</p><p>Ceased to grow.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line Elephants and tigers</title>
		
		<pubDate>Sat, 31 Jan 2009 19:23:35 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>A.C.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>As a child I walked a path,</p><p>Through Elephants, Tigers</p><p>And the odd Giraffe.</p><p>This was reality and not A dream</p><p>For I sold newspapers, to</p><p>A Circus team.</p><p>I walked the railway lines, </p><p>Doing much the same,</p><p>selling papers and </p><p>dodging trains.</p><p>Now I&#39;m getting old and </p><p>I walk a muddy path.</p><p>With feelings that,</p><p>One day, on it, </p><p>I might meet my wrath.</p><p>But now the bag I carry,</p><p>contains only food, </p><p>To maybe feed a mother,</p><p>And maybe her brood.</p><p>But this story really has no end,</p><p>It just go&#39;s on and on,</p><p>Till the food I feed the birds,</p><p>Has nearly all gone.</p><p> </p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line</title>
		
		<pubDate>Wed, 28 Jan 2009 14:04:54 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Pat Ruaune</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>I just have to look back to the day we lost three </p><p>Of our precious brood of cygnets, just over there</p><p>The cob was carrying them wild and free</p><p>To the bend in the river there, that’s where</p><p>The greenest weed grows in summer’s light</p><p>And the wise swan knows that this is the food</p><p>For his babies.  Oh, he put up a fight</p><p>But the dogs were a pack, and out for blood.</p><p>In seconds all the joy turned to deepest pain</p><p>We found two dead, but the other had gone.</p><p>This spring the life force will rise again.</p><p>And joy in our Vale once again be reborn</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line Autumn now</title>
		
		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Jan 2009 19:27:59 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>N Parker</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Autumn now, has come and gone,</p><p>To late to write of in Winter sun,</p><p>Must look forward, no looking back,</p><p>Forget the memories, now must rise </p><p>the sap,</p><p>Spring is close, but not close enough,</p><p>we&#39;re still submerged in this Winter </p><p>rough.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line What feet</title>
		
		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Jan 2009 10:55:44 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>W.O.W.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>What feet would have walked these lanes,</p><p>What feet would have been left in pain,</p><p>With endless journeys to the mills,</p><p>To colour Calico and pay the bills,</p><p>What feet would never make it home,</p><p>What fingers were worked beyond bone,</p><p>What wife waited with a child at her feet,</p><p>When the man she loved did&#39;nt come</p><p>for her to meet,</p><p>And what eyes now, are lying still,</p><p>After a lifetime of colouring Calico,</p><p>At the mill.</p><p> </p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line In the darkness</title>
		
		<pubDate>Sun, 18 Jan 2009 12:04:49 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>N Parker</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>In the darkness of night,</p><p>And not a beat of a wing,</p><p>The Owl sails silently over fields,</p><p>To see what food they will bring.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line January Morns</title>
		
		<pubDate>Sun, 18 Jan 2009 10:03:35 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>A.C.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>It&#39;s a late January morn,</p><p>And they are still dark,</p><p>But the birds they know,</p><p>Their chorus must start,</p><p>and so they stand on</p><p>the highest branch in the tree,</p><p>Singing listen.listen,listen</p><p>to me.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line And dance</title>
		
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Jan 2009 15:45:32 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>A.C.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>and dance in drifts around the trees,</p><p>singing we come first, before your leaves,</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line</title>
		
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Jan 2009 13:23:09 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>molly119</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>but soon the spring will start to show</p><p>watch the crocus saying hello</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line Silhouette'd Horses</title>
		
		<pubDate>Thu, 15 Jan 2009 16:27:25 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>W.O.W.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Silhouette&#39;d Horses on the hill,</p><p>Stand like statues in the winter chill,</p><p>Heads not held high, but hanging low,</p><p>Theres no escape, nowhere to go,</p><p>They wait patiently, for the turn of day,</p><p>And if they&#39;re lucky, they might just get</p><p>a nice feed of good fresh hay.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line Laughing and joking</title>
		
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Jan 2009 11:42:07 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Norman Parker</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Laughing and joking,</p><p>Its Springtime and to each other, </p><p>They have such a lot to say.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line</title>
		
		<pubDate>Mon, 12 Jan 2009 20:26:15 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>molly119</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>to see and young man and his lass,</p><p>walk hand in hand along the way</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line Last years Oaks</title>
		
		<pubDate>Mon, 12 Jan 2009 14:18:24 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Mr N Parker</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Last years Oaks now shed their leaves,</p><p>They curl to the ground gently on the breeze,</p><p>A Fox watches from behind winter grass,</p><p>He thinks you&#39;ve not noticed as you pass,</p><p>A fine specimen, the best i&#39;ve seen,</p><p>Must have fed well this winter, he was&#39;nt to lean.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line A place of worship</title>
		
		<pubDate>Sun, 11 Jan 2009 11:05:44 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Mr N Parker</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>A place of worship,</p><p>A place to pray,</p><p>A place to return to </p><p>each and every day,</p><p>A place called Reddish</p><p>a place with a Vale,</p><p>A place of such beauty</p><p>To many, this place is, </p><p>their Holy Grail.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line Paths that</title>
		
		<pubDate>Sun, 11 Jan 2009 10:19:56 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Mr N Parker</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Paths that wind down by </p><p>a river,</p><p>Horses stand in fields </p><p>and shiver,</p><p>Theres no escape from this </p><p>winter cold,</p><p>In this monumental place </p><p>of old,</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line</title>
		
		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Jan 2009 23:20:12 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Tracy</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p><em>Then the sounds of summer will lure them in</em></p><p><em>woodpigeons, woodpeckers and honking geese...</em></p><p><em>--- </em><strong><em> Hoppy(guest)</em></strong>&#160;</p><p>making us feel more at peace when summer is here i bet you cant compeat</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line</title>
		
		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Jan 2009 15:35:48 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>_abi_</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>I&#39;ve been meaning for some time</p><p>To get down to &#39;the Vale&#39;</p><p>But everytime I plan something,</p><p>I inevitably FAIL.</p><p>I&#39;ll get down there eventually,</p><p>And deal with the funny looks,</p><p>&#39;Cos I&#39;m the sort to sit there</p><p>Talking to the ducks...</p><p>I take with me some seeds and nuts</p><p>For hungry faces on the way</p><p>And also my digital camera...</p><p>To remind me of my stay.</p><p>It looks glorious there in the early morn,</p><p>I just wished I was a morning person!</p><p>But for now, here&#39;s my rhyme - </p><p>Come on y&#39;all keep versin&#39;!</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line</title>
		
		<pubDate>Fri, 9 Jan 2009 12:01:59 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Hoppy</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Then the sounds of summer will lure them in</p><p>woodpigeons, woodpeckers and honking geese...</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line Frog</title>
		
		<pubDate>Fri, 9 Jan 2009 11:18:00 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>W.O.W.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>A Frog has just crossed my path, </p><p>Well actually, it took three jumps out,</p><p>And three jumps back,</p><p>I picked the Frog up,</p><p>And it turned out to be a Toad,</p><p>And I thought my friend,</p><p>We both need help</p><p>With crossing the road.</p><p> </p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line footprints in the snow</title>
		
		<pubDate>Wed, 7 Jan 2009 16:10:41 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>W.O.W.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>But for the present moment,</p><p>All we have to show,</p><p>Are footprints of some poor creatures,</p><p>Caught out, and unaware,</p><p>In the freezing Winter snow </p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line I dream now</title>
		
		<pubDate>Wed, 7 Jan 2009 15:22:19 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>W.O.W.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>I dream now of Spring morns,</p><p>Of birdsong and babbling brooks,</p><p>And early morning mists on fields,</p><p>Through which, only a spring sun</p><p>can cut.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line But on the horizon</title>
		
		<pubDate>Wed, 7 Jan 2009 14:19:20 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>W.O.W.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>But over on a Pennine horizon,</p><p>Of each and every day,</p><p>A quality of light tells you,</p><p>Spring is pushing Winter,</p><p>Further and further </p><p>Away.</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line</title>
		
		<pubDate>Tue, 6 Jan 2009 15:47:50 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Pat</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>It’s quiet now, and cold and bleak </p><p>In the glare of the snow and the blight of the frost</p><p>And numbness spreads in the fingers and most</p><p>Bloody is the robin’s breast</p>]]></description>
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		<title>Re: First line</title>
		
		<pubDate>Mon, 5 Jan 2009 12:52:01 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>molly119</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>With grass and trees wild flowers growing</p><p>Listen hear the river flowing</p>]]></description>
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		<title>First line</title>
		
		<pubDate>Mon, 5 Jan 2009 05:35:49 GMT</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>philipkinsey</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Not far from housing estates,</p><p>the motorway and factory gates,</p><p>A green oasis awaits..................</p>]]></description>
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